musings and rantings on all that matters and all that doesn't
Sunday, November 24, 2013
Yeah
Smash
Shatter
Punch
Demolish
Demons
Pain
Anguish
Guilt
Bullshit
Take
Give
Fuck
Me
You
And
Everything
Else
Too
1 comment:
J
said...
Yes.Good. I mean good that the words are here and that you are here and sensation and sound are here and so are you and you have made choices here, chosen words wisely and left out others, arranged the words in a way that lets us respond as you intend with still leaving us room so that you haven't sledgehammered us into a response. Yes I realize I have used more words to respond than you used to write it - but that is my choice. This works and it still has that secret rambler ingredient of trying to connect, trying, a lack of twittish self importance, a lack of cowardly disclaimer, pain is not glamorized here or presented archly. It is sincere but reaches out almost against its own better instincts. Glad to see your words, wordful friend of sorts.
1 comment:
Yes.Good. I mean good that the words are here and that you are here and sensation and sound are here and so are you and you have made choices here, chosen words wisely and left out others, arranged the words in a way that lets us respond as you intend with still leaving us room so that you haven't sledgehammered us into a response. Yes I realize I have used more words to respond than you used to write it - but that is my choice. This works and it still has that secret rambler ingredient of trying to connect, trying, a lack of twittish self importance, a lack of cowardly disclaimer, pain is not glamorized here or presented archly. It is sincere but reaches out almost against its own better instincts. Glad to see your words, wordful friend of sorts.
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